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The Sage’s Halloween Short Story Contest WINNER

"Surprise! It’s Santa."

Trisha Tong, Short Story Winner

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7 Responses to “The Sage’s Halloween Short Story Contest WINNER”

  1. Ziggy Ulugia on November 1st, 2019 5:54 am

    Wow, just wow this story has just corrupted christmas for me XD this is a really great story but the ending that was crazy because you’d expect her to have a happy ending or just say “it was all a dream” that was the best part about it. Great Story!

  2. Zara on November 1st, 2019 10:04 pm

    This had really descriptive language, and was an interesting read. Good job!

  3. Nikita Ovchinnikov on November 4th, 2019 7:36 am

    am spooked good job

  4. Sofia Aloia on November 5th, 2019 3:51 pm

    Ahhh very good story! I refrained from making my story like this because it said it had to be school appropriate and I didn’t want to be disqualified for being too graphic. Congrats to Trisha and we should have more writing contests.

  5. Andrew on November 18th, 2019 9:30 pm

    Thanks, wont be able to sleep now.

  6. Tom on December 3rd, 2019 2:56 pm

    Woah, move over Tim Burton! Looks like there’s a new Nightmare Before Christmas in town!

  7. Tom on March 10th, 2020 10:09 am

    Wow Trisha, you took Santa Claus and made him Satan Claus. It does explain why he always comes in through fireplaces; fireplaces make very fitting portals to Inferno – I mean the North Pole.

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